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Creativity, set me on fire.
Leave me hanging on your last word and pull me so close.
I want to hear your wisdom; I want to breathe in every part of you.
I want to be kissed by your knowledge and learn to understand.
Just so I can stand on my own.

Be my pillar and lift me up for the world to see.
Show them my layers. Let me spill my colors.
Emotions reflected in a mirror image of all the parts of me.
I am glad to be blessed by you today and forever.
Creativity is my eternal treasure.

Never to give it up, sometimes sparked.
Sometimes fizzled. Always speaking to me in riddles.
Let me figure out the puzzles.
To make a work of Art.
©2008-2010 =EdoFangirl
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Author's Comments

I'm really proud of this and I like how it flowed from the ink of my pen onto the lined paper so easily. It was meant to be. This is probably my favorite new poem so far.

Edit: Took :iconmpmg:'s advice and changed 'Be my pillar and open me up for the world to see' to 'lift me up'. Tell me what you think

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:iconyurbleyurble13:
...my god. This is just *tears well* This is how I feel everytime I get inspired <3 Like I'm dancing with my muse, and if we mess up the dance, the picture is ruined. Everytime I type a fanfic, I need to hold the bruush straight on the canvas of my muse, or the inspiration will run away...yeah. LOVE THIS

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I'm open-minded, I accept the pairings even if I don't support them. Who's with me :3?

Meh Edo

I support Lexfuu, how bout you?! :>
:iconedofangirl:
Awwww <3 Glad you like it...<333

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"Give into innocence, turn back the clock hands, and let yourself be free."--Talking to my mother after she was complaining about stress.

My sister from another sperm is [link]
:iconmumy-chan:
For some odd reason, it reminded me of Sidharta and Govinda

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:iconedofangirl:
That's really interesting that it reminded you of those two

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"Give into innocence, turn back the clock hands, and let yourself be free."--Talking to my mother after she was complaining about stress.

My sister from another sperm is [link]
:iconlaydieloki:
This is a really nice poem ^^ It flows very well and it has some nice imagery to it.

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:iconedofangirl:
Thanks so much 8D

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"Give into innocence, turn back the clock hands, and let yourself be free."--Talking to my mother after she was complaining about stress.

My sister from another sperm is [link]
:iconninjastar13:
I love the tone and rhythm of the poem. i reread it twice good job!!

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Peace :peace:
:iconedofangirl:
Thank you so much. I'm really glad you liked it

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"Give into innocence, turn back the clock hands, and let yourself be free."--Talking to my mother after she was complaining about stress.

My sister from another sperm is [link]
:iconpurpelblur:
This is beautiful. Great work!

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HAPPY 2010! Wishing you much good luck, health, and wealth. :wheat:
:iconedofangirl:
Thank you so much ^_^

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"Give into innocence, turn back the clock hands, and let yourself be free."--Talking to my mother after she was complaining about stress.

My sister from another sperm is [link]

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