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i make words permanent in fumes.
i suffocate on my strangled thoughts,
and my words leave me in a hole.

you gave me my pen (my shovel).
you told me to keep writing, so i did.
i tore through the paper. i ripped it to shreds.

and then you did the dirtiest thing.
you left me to rot in the dirt.
i danced with spiders.

the worms kept me company
and now i decided to write in my grave.
i wrote my own epitaph.

"it's all for you" i said
with my teeth rotted out,
and my body lying there in cherry
just as my mom promised should she
outlive me.

this is what i get for writing in permanent marker
©2009-2010 =EdoFangirl
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Author's Comments

I felt sick after writing in permanent marker. I got inspired. I am so fucked up.


(I really, really hate this poem)

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:iconedofangirl:
haha, thank you. Even if it IS a piece of crap. : P

Thanks for the fave and the watch. Much appreciated : )

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I like Dr. Pepper and Yurbys <3
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I like it : D And I really love that no caps thing you do <3

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I'm open-minded, I accept the pairings even if I don't support them. Who's with me :3?

Meh Edo

I support Lexfuu, how bout you?! :>
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It is a great poem! I love it and u shouldnt be so critcal of yourself!

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Thank you :)

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No prob =D

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