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One Sky, One Destiny by =EdoFangirl:iconEdoFangirl:



e m p t y.
my hand as the grip dissapears.
we speak of promises of meeting again.
he'll return, but for now he has to be
the chosen one. he tightens his hold on
destiny, but i know he'll come back home and
unlock the chains with the key to my heart.
we'll play again, lost in the sands of time,
and things will be as they were before.
sky, land, and sea will be one,
and light will conquer all.

p a i n.
i gave into ebony, fearful of the golden eyes,
i am the betrayer, i was taken in by the
misleading witch who fed me lies.
i grip my hilt and fight with myself, and
the blackness of my heart won for a moment.
i was taken, and the ruler made me see how
wrong i was. i will be back when i atone for my
sins. i am so sorry, sky, i failed you, old friend.
but when i am ready i will come back, ready to
sit in the trees and listen to the waves lap on
the sand. i want to embrace the forever blue.

h o p e.
i am joined by the king's servants, the knight and the magician,
in order to fulfill the destiny. i hold the hearts of many in my hands
and i am the one who will bring light back to the desolate world.
so many hurt, so many to protect. i can do it if i stay strong.
i'll get back to them. i'll get home where the sun shines blue,
and the ground is firm under my feet, and the sea is always beautiful
except for that tempest that seperated us. as well as the world, my friends
need saving and i will be the hero no matter what the cost.
i will go to the ends of the earth for them, and travel until i can't anymore.
because it's not just my duty to myself, but to everyone.
i am the u n l i k e l y s a v i o r
©2009-2010 =EdoFangirl
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Author's Comments

Based on: Kingdom Hearts
Song Listened to while writing: Remembering Sunday on Repeat


Written for :iconcyantre:'s Video Game Poetry contest. :] I quite like the structure and how it came out. I hope everyone else does to. I haven't written anything about Kingdom Hearts in a while, it feels nice. But in order, if you couldn't guess, it's Kairi, Riku, and Sora. :]

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:icongirlofgreys:
Makes me want to play through these games again =)

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=)

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This is wonderful, very well done!:clap::love:

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Thanks so much :)

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Of course!:dance:

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